Short narrative

Short narrative

3 characters all teenagers in secondary school

Characters:

1)Emily-A bully that looks intimidating

             Costume: casual/ gothic wear, wears different to everyone else

2)Tom- One of the bullies that is scary and intimidating

             Costume: Casual/ baggy clothes dark colors  

3)Laura- vulnerable victim (gets picked on for incident she took part in)

               Costume: Wearing clothes that are old fashioned and covered up as she feels uncomfortable

Scene about a girl getting bullied in school.
In the clip there are 3 students, two of the students are bullying and picking on the vulnerable girl.
The first scene shows both the bullies making comments about the girl and planning how they are going to terrorize the girl without anyone else in school seeing. This means the bullying scene takes place in one room with no one in (as witness). The girl innocently comes into the scene where the bullies are talking to print of her homework, this is when the bullies attack (verbally) making fun of her. 

This scene shows the girl getting picked on (emphasis emotions on girls face using camera) for example her crying or getting emotional. Also in this scene show the bullies getting a ‘thrill’ from making the girl upset. The bullies refer to the girl as being a ‘slag’ and bring up an incident the girl was involved in that gave her the bad reputation. The bullies make jokes about the situation like pretending to reenact the girl (pretend to kiss back of hand/ behaving immature about serious matter). 

The girl then runs out of room (tracking her movement/ emphasizes rushing out of from) in this scene she has locked herself in the toilet, shows her being angry at herself and being isolated from the others.